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pots selling company by wnek pots selling company by wnek
Critique and comments appreciated ;)
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I've tried to explain my ratings as best I can :)

The overall theme and color scheme Is very successful. The Images you have chosen are very appropriate and cohesive to the composition as a whole, the background is reminiscent of stainless steel -which I thought was a clever touch.
+5 Vision & Impact.

I appreciate the incorporation of the JavaScript product carousel, it is a nice feature, but I have seen many websites with it incorporated right underneath the header banner. Maybe it could be moved to a vertical orientation down one side it would echo the right panel on the left side? This might shift it too far away from the asymmetry you've created so use your best judgement.
+ 3 Originality

As for technique I feel it is beautifully executed, the only reason removed a half star is the fact that (correct me If I'm wrong please) the arches are differently obtuse- Perhaps that is my OCD side talking.
+ 4.5 Technique

Excellent job, you could easily sell this if you haven't!
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basilart23 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016
Good example too :
nice work. check my work
CarlosRamosWeb Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Gostei do estilo usado!!!!!!!!!!!!
kaedesign Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
very cool :+fav:
wnek Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010
thank you ;)
kaedesign Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
don't mention it :hug:
silent-Princee Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
nice work...
SelfQuest Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Interface Designer
This is a great design. By taking the curves and shapes from the logo and put it in the design, you've made it quite comfortable to look at it. It is much movement and things that happens in the picture and I don't get bored. You have used alot of red, but I don't get that repeating and boring feeling, because you have used the whitespace in such a good way!
Exept a few small things like double seperators between the menubar buttons, to little air for the Chef's name to breath between the logo and the chefs head and a random placed casserole in the right upper I think this piece of webdesign. It should communicate well to the customers I think!
der-sebastian Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Bubbss Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010
Creative and pretty! Very good job! I like the details and usage of the logo. One thing, I can't read the copyright, white on grey xD
HeronZiegel Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010   Interface Designer
Very cool! Better than anything I could make for sure. x3 I thought I would offer one suggestion though - the hover link has a kind of uncomfortable push-pull effect, at least to me. I like how it gets lighter, putting it more in the foreground, but the cut-off darker spiral puts it back into the background, so it's very visually confusing to me. Maybe that's just me? Anyway it looks good as a whole!
FerdiCildiz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
layaweek Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010
Bardzo ładne kolory i wszystko się komponuje.
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